Post by Cloudedpaw on Dec 1, 2008 22:29:11 GMT -5
First off books. I LOVE BOOKS!!!!! I LOVE TWILIGHT AND WARRIORS!!! WOHOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!lol end of subject.
Story writing!
Now, I just made up two little snips of stories for you!
Flamepaw rode a magical dragon toward Spider. The dragon was red, to fit in with it's lava-filled environment, and it also had a ball at the end of it's tail. The ball was filled with spikes, some longer than others. It also had two gleaming horns and a feather that was brown as the muddy scenery underneath them. It's eyes matched Flamepaw's, only they where golden-green with small flickers of silver. It's nose was flaring and small clouds of a natural smoke billowed from them. It's eyes suddenly narrowed as it saw another one of it's kind. The thorn-tailed-horned-quail dragon spanned out of control and stopped when it was very close to the ground, Flamepaw could even claw at the tufts of grass that flew by them. The gold-green eyed dragon lifted his wings and flew up in a straight line, wind almost blowing Flamepaw away. The other dragon was right above them and Flamepaw's dragon roared and fire escaped it's mighty jaws. The dragon above them let out a screech and it's heather-yellow eyes flared with anger. The dragon with yellow eyes whacked at Flamepaw's dragon, almost hitting Flamepaw.
"We can't afford this fight, Ballion!" Flamepaw cried to his dragon. Ballion ignored Flamepaw and swung his mighty tail toward the other dragon. Ballion's tail hit it's target and blood from the wound that formed from Ballion's spiked tail-tip dripped onto Flamepaw. Although the blood was a brighter red you still wouldn't tell it was on Flamepaw from a distance. Flamepaw growled and clawed at the other Dragon's paw that was about to knock him off. Long talons tangled at the edge of his long red fur as Flamepaw barley jumped back in time. Wind knocked Flamepaw making him tumble backward a little bit. Flamepaw madly tried to find his foot-hole and when he did the other dragon started to loose altitude. Flamepaw ran across Ballion's back and gripped his neck. Ballion barley even noticed his as he breathed fire, aiming for the other dragon's wounded belly. The other dragon whipped around, missing the fire, and he racked his talons across Ballion's thick head. Some blood glistened on Ballion's forehead but Ballion just shook it off. Ballion flew up, higher than the other dragon. He made it look like he was fleeing by waving his tail madly as he flew off. The other dragon was not confused, nor excepting defeat as Balion flew up. Flamepaw yowled as Ballion swooped down and landed on the other Dragon's back. Wind almost tor off his whiskers as he was plummeted by Ballion. In the great air battle he caught site of Spider. Flamepaw growled in Ballion's ear,
"We must get what he has! That little rainbow in his mouth!"
"After I defend my borders! That was the deal!" Ballion growled back and he lowered his mighty head. Ballion opened his mouth and rapped his jaws around the other dragons neck. The other dragon's heathery eyes where once blazing in the fire of battle but, now they where darkening like the sun setting. It's eyes closed, never to open with fire or with love again. The dragon plummeted to the ground, leaving blood flying and scattering in the air following it. Flamepaw then felt as if he was on a roller coaster, because Ballion was doing flips and loops and circles of victory in the sky. He finished by spreading his great wings and letting fire fill the sky. He then plummeted and almost hit Spider with the force of five trains before snatching his prize. He flew higher and higher then swooped down and land on the ground. His muscles ripped under his scaly pelt as his legs bunched up to lay down. Flamepaw jumped about two fox-lengths and landed on two feet. His front and back left legs fell on the ground awkwardly since the absence of his tail. Flamepaw then ran up and grabbed the avatar, leaving Ballion fly up into the sun-filled sky. Flamepaw saw Spider as a tiny, itsy-bitsy dot in the edge of even a hawk's site.
"Wow." Flamepaw whispered as he walked away. When he looked back he could no longer see spider so he started running in the beautiful plains. He felt like a cheetah, gliding the ground with no trees, water, mud or even gravity stopping him. He felt joy, pure joy, rise inside of him like the sun and he let out a yowl. His joy suddenly evaporated just like dew in the sun.
"Oh Bluebird! Are you running with me?" He asked around the avatar in his mouth. A shimmering shape appeared on his left side, the cat was tinged red like a spirit and she had dazzling blue eyes. Flamepaw meowed to his mother,
"Oh how I miss you!" Bluebird just smiled and looked next to him. Flamepaw looked at his right side to, there was a dark tabby with stars glittering around him. His orange eyes sparkled with joy, wisdom and sadness to. Although the cat wasn't wiry like Bluebird and he wasn't a fast runner he still caught up. Flamepaw felt as if he could run forever with his mom and dad. Although Flamepaw knew that when a cat came close they would disappear he wouldn't let that get him down. Flamepaw then scared himself when he though of himself running with his mate , them both shimmering cats. He imagined them as StarClan cats running with the children that he may father. He shook his head and suddenly someone caught up to him and Bluebird and Lionclaw disappeared like mist.
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Story writing!
Now, I just made up two little snips of stories for you!
Flamepaw rode a magical dragon toward Spider. The dragon was red, to fit in with it's lava-filled environment, and it also had a ball at the end of it's tail. The ball was filled with spikes, some longer than others. It also had two gleaming horns and a feather that was brown as the muddy scenery underneath them. It's eyes matched Flamepaw's, only they where golden-green with small flickers of silver. It's nose was flaring and small clouds of a natural smoke billowed from them. It's eyes suddenly narrowed as it saw another one of it's kind. The thorn-tailed-horned-quail dragon spanned out of control and stopped when it was very close to the ground, Flamepaw could even claw at the tufts of grass that flew by them. The gold-green eyed dragon lifted his wings and flew up in a straight line, wind almost blowing Flamepaw away. The other dragon was right above them and Flamepaw's dragon roared and fire escaped it's mighty jaws. The dragon above them let out a screech and it's heather-yellow eyes flared with anger. The dragon with yellow eyes whacked at Flamepaw's dragon, almost hitting Flamepaw.
"We can't afford this fight, Ballion!" Flamepaw cried to his dragon. Ballion ignored Flamepaw and swung his mighty tail toward the other dragon. Ballion's tail hit it's target and blood from the wound that formed from Ballion's spiked tail-tip dripped onto Flamepaw. Although the blood was a brighter red you still wouldn't tell it was on Flamepaw from a distance. Flamepaw growled and clawed at the other Dragon's paw that was about to knock him off. Long talons tangled at the edge of his long red fur as Flamepaw barley jumped back in time. Wind knocked Flamepaw making him tumble backward a little bit. Flamepaw madly tried to find his foot-hole and when he did the other dragon started to loose altitude. Flamepaw ran across Ballion's back and gripped his neck. Ballion barley even noticed his as he breathed fire, aiming for the other dragon's wounded belly. The other dragon whipped around, missing the fire, and he racked his talons across Ballion's thick head. Some blood glistened on Ballion's forehead but Ballion just shook it off. Ballion flew up, higher than the other dragon. He made it look like he was fleeing by waving his tail madly as he flew off. The other dragon was not confused, nor excepting defeat as Balion flew up. Flamepaw yowled as Ballion swooped down and landed on the other Dragon's back. Wind almost tor off his whiskers as he was plummeted by Ballion. In the great air battle he caught site of Spider. Flamepaw growled in Ballion's ear,
"We must get what he has! That little rainbow in his mouth!"
"After I defend my borders! That was the deal!" Ballion growled back and he lowered his mighty head. Ballion opened his mouth and rapped his jaws around the other dragons neck. The other dragon's heathery eyes where once blazing in the fire of battle but, now they where darkening like the sun setting. It's eyes closed, never to open with fire or with love again. The dragon plummeted to the ground, leaving blood flying and scattering in the air following it. Flamepaw then felt as if he was on a roller coaster, because Ballion was doing flips and loops and circles of victory in the sky. He finished by spreading his great wings and letting fire fill the sky. He then plummeted and almost hit Spider with the force of five trains before snatching his prize. He flew higher and higher then swooped down and land on the ground. His muscles ripped under his scaly pelt as his legs bunched up to lay down. Flamepaw jumped about two fox-lengths and landed on two feet. His front and back left legs fell on the ground awkwardly since the absence of his tail. Flamepaw then ran up and grabbed the avatar, leaving Ballion fly up into the sun-filled sky. Flamepaw saw Spider as a tiny, itsy-bitsy dot in the edge of even a hawk's site.
"Wow." Flamepaw whispered as he walked away. When he looked back he could no longer see spider so he started running in the beautiful plains. He felt like a cheetah, gliding the ground with no trees, water, mud or even gravity stopping him. He felt joy, pure joy, rise inside of him like the sun and he let out a yowl. His joy suddenly evaporated just like dew in the sun.
"Oh Bluebird! Are you running with me?" He asked around the avatar in his mouth. A shimmering shape appeared on his left side, the cat was tinged red like a spirit and she had dazzling blue eyes. Flamepaw meowed to his mother,
"Oh how I miss you!" Bluebird just smiled and looked next to him. Flamepaw looked at his right side to, there was a dark tabby with stars glittering around him. His orange eyes sparkled with joy, wisdom and sadness to. Although the cat wasn't wiry like Bluebird and he wasn't a fast runner he still caught up. Flamepaw felt as if he could run forever with his mom and dad. Although Flamepaw knew that when a cat came close they would disappear he wouldn't let that get him down. Flamepaw then scared himself when he though of himself running with his mate , them both shimmering cats. He imagined them as StarClan cats running with the children that he may father. He shook his head and suddenly someone caught up to him and Bluebird and Lionclaw disappeared like mist.
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